A university should have some features. I mean, there are a lot of universities in Turkey, or in the world, but few of them can offer you the opportunities that a university should do. For example, the instructors should be followers of the recent developments. They shouldn't be behind of the progress as a university teacher.
And there is a feature that is not about university, but I think this is a must. I think the university students must be conscious. They must be aware of the things that are happening around them. That's one of the important
characteristics that a university student must have.
And Metu is the ideal university for me. Because I can find the thing that I'm looking for. There are a lot of things that a university should have, but how the students think, how their mind works is the most important one, I think. I love being here. Thanks to all the features Metu has.
YanıtlaSilDear Buse.
You obviously defined your ideal university and its features. It is METU for you and for most of us. As we studied very much and wanted it, we are here in METU. As you mentioned METU is the place offering lots of opportunities. Professional instructors here have. Also, quality of education is the case. We got high level of education here. In short, METU is our ideal University. You stressed on very significant points but it would be better if you illustrated the paragraph with more detailed examples. Beside few given mistakes I did not face many other problematic sentences. As we all have been taught, it is better to start the sentence with appropriate connector. Instead And you could use Moreover, In addition and Furthermore.
I liked your paragraph and the design of your page.
Nice job:)))
Dear Buse !! I found your writing a little emotional, but that doesn't mean that I disliked it. It is very informative. you use your language in correct way. But it needs to be improved :D
YanıtlaSilDear Gulalek,
YanıtlaSilThank you for your comment. You are right. I should have used 'in addition, moreover, or furthermore' instead of 'and'. Thanks for making me notice my mistake. :)
Dear Barış,
Thanks a lot for your comment. Yes, I agree that my writing is emotional. However, is 'being emotional' a bad thing? I do not think it is. Thank you again. :)
thanks :D
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